the first is my little sister she wanted to cross a tiny gutter
she pretending to cross the giant gutter and I laugh so she laugh too.
If she can speak clearly she gotta say help me I'm stuck over here!
so I go to her and we jump together and she jump really high I can't imagine if a girl like her
can jump that high so from now on I must to watch her carefully.
Ariq.. You have done a good job!
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This is my little sister. She was playing jumping with me.
At the beginning, she wanted to cross a tiny gutter. She pretended she was crossing a giant gutter.
I laughed, so she laughed too.
If she could speak clearly, she would say, "Help me! I'm stuck over here!"
Then, I went to her, and we jumped together. She jumped really high.
I can't imagine that a girl, as little as her, can jump that high. Therefore, from this day forwards, I must watch her carefully.
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Nice story, Ariq .. Keep on writing to improve your writing skills and your English.. ;-)
Ariq ajak dede nya ikut Penyebrangan basah yuk :D
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